Thursday, 16 November 2017

Week 9 user feedback with Audio

What is your degree program?
Digital Media: Animation
What do you think the story is about?
At first I thought it was about a traveller getting stuck on the ice in the artic. Then I realized it was illustrative of someone dealing with OCD or ANXIETY.
Comments on the characters and environment
The character’s poses have nice silhouettes at times, but the model doesn’t really lend to the expressions of the animation. The environment is recognizable but lacking in visual interest.
Overall timing and pacing of the story?
Timing was pretty good, there was a shock-factor at the end of the story. As for pacing, there are some opportunities to use overlapping action to make the animation seem less robotic.
Do you feel the message is conveyed clearly?

I understood the meaning pretty well and I felt emotionally connected to the character. 

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