Feedback on week 9 progress

What is your degree program?

Interactive systems and Video Games Design

What do you think the story is about?

OCD Awareness

Comments on the characters and environment

The environments and characters are not at the highest standard but the simulation of snow is shown brilliantly as the contrast of colours also work very well with the tone of the scene. A standout piece of modelling would be the hood and the eyes as they work very smoothly with the animation and look great.

Overall timing and pacing of the story?

The overall pace of the animation is quite fast with quick camera movements but the animation itself, from the running and stopping holds together at a great timing. A standout piece of animation in terms of timing and delivery would be the stopping of the character when he is running.

Do you feel the message is conveyed clearly?

The message was conveyed in a very effective way and allowed the user to see everything very clearly. At an animation of 1:42 the story is told brilliantly and very effectively as it finds a great balance between both scenes. The story also holds very well to the meaning and wraps things up nicely at the end.

Other comments

Great progress, I would recommend adjusting the initial ice cracking animation done from the top view.