Lengthening the beginning shot

As suggested, the opening shot was too fast and jerky in the week ten animation. Because of this, for week eleven, I have lengthened the shot, adding a few more subtle movements and making the camera move into the character as part of a transitioning pan shot before taking the next shot. Also as suggested by my supervisor, I cut the shots between the character walking and the title logo appearing.

Here is the clip as of currently with the fixed elements. I am still not so sure about the fade to black segment before the titles but I will discuss it further with my supervisor. As for the lengthening of the opening shot, it definitely looks better as it works nicer with the music, flowing well into the story without the viewer being stuck watching something daunting straight off.